Nice story Millie! Mr Salsa look awesome on the cover! He sounds very obnoxious and vain. Does Mr Salsa like to eat Salsa? -Anahera, Year 7, Awahono School.
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Nice story Millie! Mr Salsa look awesome on the cover! He sounds very obnoxious and vain. Does Mr Salsa like to eat Salsa?
ReplyDelete-Anahera, Year 7, Awahono School.
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ReplyDeleteHi Millie
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. The cover is very nice and its well written.
What gave you the idea for the story?
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willlow